Thread:LunarWing/@comment-5850386-20130802031544/@comment-10824773-20130802114742

It's not explicitly stated beforehand where the Mark II Variant can be obtained; therefore I put "Gun Emporium" and linked it.

Next, to make POSITIVELY SURE that ANYONE can find it, EVEN NEW PLAYERS THAT HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THEY'RE DOING, I put "Upgrade Job" because of the three tiers of jobs; upgrade, collect, and customize.

100 kills with the gun because 100 kills is just too general; 100 kills with what?

When I was on my OTHER main long time ago (now banned) I didn't know what the heck Mark II was, and so I got 100 kills and didn't know what to do from there. I didn't want anyone to be in the same shoes as me so I put "collect as a reward" so it shows that you have to go back, just like a daily job.

More details, the better.

Also there is no info that is repeated twice. The info that I edited is the first time to appear on the page. The information above my edit is just all about the L85A1 CAMO, while my edit is about getting the Mark II variant.