Thread:LunarWing/@comment-5850386-20130802031544/@comment-5850386-20130802180342

This is what I put down:

"The L85A1 CAMO is able to be upgraded to the L85A1 CAMO MARK II. To do so, one must accept the job in the Gun Emporium and get 100 kills with the L85A1 CAMO."

This is what you put down:

"The L85A1 CAMO is able to be upgraded to the L85A1 CAMO MARK II via the Gun Emporium. To do so, one must accept the Upgrade Job for the L85A1 CAMO, obtain 100 kills with the gun, and collect the MARK II Variant as a reward."

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In my explanation, it is already stated where and how to get the MARK II variant. Your explanation is just wordier.

Also, to address points in your argument:

1. Gun Emporium already stated and linked.

2. Its pretty clear. Upgraded is already used as a key word, so when people go to get it upgraded, they know what to look for. Its common sense.

3. You wrote "100 kills with the gun because 100 kills is just too general; 100 kills with what?" Are you kidding?

4. Everyone basically knows from Daily Jobs now. however, that IS a good point that I concede to.

5. The majority of the edit adds nothing.

6. Its repeating the same info. Nothing new is learned from it. Its just wordier.